- There is the basis to a good response here, but you need more detail!
- You are picking out relevant aspects - sound especially.
EBI:
- For more notes required during screening.
- At least 3 paragraph for each question.
- Much more media language and deeper analysis required to reach the higher grades.
Learner Response:
- If more revision was done, then I think A much higher mark could have been achieved.
- I also definitely needed to make more notes during the screenings as this is what caused me to not be able to write a vast amount in the actual answer.
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